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Hello, Dan! Welcome to YWS! I'm Rick. For ever two reviews you have, you can post one of your own work. Also, after you have twenty-five reviews, you can access ...

Hello, Savannah. Welcome to YWS! I'm Rick. That's good you keep private information hidden. Always got to stay safe. :). For ever two reviews you have, you can post one ...

This is really good. I like how you described a forgotten someone. The world wakes bleary eyed, to another day of drizzle and dull skies, oblivious to my perception, and ...

I really don't see where you're going with this. I like the rhyming and rhythm, though. I just don't see the meaning in this. Also, I'd like to point out ...

Hello, Because. :). I really like your poem. I love the repition you used in this. I also really like your rhythm and rhyming. I think you should extend this, ...

Welcome to YWS, Teo. I'm Rick. I hope you get a lot of help with your work. Also, for every two reviews you give, you can post one of your ...

Welcome to YWS, Child. I'm Rick. Ah, yeah, watch the chat speak. Well, I hope you get a lot of help with your work. Also, for every two reviews you ...

I really like this. I love how you described a gangsta in details. This is a really funny, but, yet true poem about the gangsta society. I like the repitition ...

This is rally good, Tiff. I love how true this is. You don't have a lot of rythm in this, but it's really excellent. I love how you described certain ...

Hola, Angie. Welcome to YWS! I'm Rick. I hope you find all the help you can on here. Once you get atleast two reviews, you can stsrt posting your own ...

Cat-Chan. XD. Nice pic. Very good angle. A bit too close to the tree. I like it. :D -Rick.

Hell, Jordan! I'm Rick. Welcome to YWS. If you have any questions/concerns, please feel free to send a PM my way. :). After you get two reviews, you can post ...

Hello, Amira. I really like this. I think you should build on from this. Extrend it, and add more details. I like how you started off by describing someone special. ...

:O Your dog's in jail!? Hahaha. Just messing. :wink: You have a really cute dog. :). I used to own a golden retriever when I was little. Very well behaved ...

Tiff! You're soo beautiful! You have such a beautiful smile. :) The third pic is my favorite. :) -Rick.